Comments for Hadi Khojinian http://hadikhojinian.wordpress.com Just another WordPress.com weblog Sun, 09 Aug 2009 13:03:50 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on If you are going to try it, go all the way. – Factotum by hadi http://hadikhojinian.wordpress.com/2009/07/17/if-you-are-going-to-try-it-go-all-the-way-factotum/#comment-50 hadi Sun, 09 Aug 2009 13:03:50 +0000 http://hadikhojinian.wordpress.com/2009/07/17/if-you-are-going-to-try-it-go-all-the-way-factotum/#comment-50 Thanks Peter Thanks Peter

]]> Comment on If you are going to try it, go all the way. – Factotum by Peter Gray http://hadikhojinian.wordpress.com/2009/07/17/if-you-are-going-to-try-it-go-all-the-way-factotum/#comment-48 Peter Gray Tue, 04 Aug 2009 22:35:49 +0000 http://hadikhojinian.wordpress.com/2009/07/17/if-you-are-going-to-try-it-go-all-the-way-factotum/#comment-48 Good clip snatched there mate. Kind of echo's Star War's Master Joda "...try not, do or do not, there is no try." Good clip snatched there mate.
Kind of echo’s Star War’s Master Joda “…try not, do or do not, there is no try.”

]]> Comment on Our Bed Of Loneliness by Peter Gray http://hadikhojinian.wordpress.com/2009/04/18/our-bed-of-loneliness/#comment-47 Peter Gray Tue, 04 Aug 2009 22:31:30 +0000 http://hadikhojinian.wordpress.com/?p=197#comment-47 Hey man, that was pretty...interesting. Kidding. I thought it was pretty good. Though the style seemed to me (a novice in poetry) to change in several places. I think it was the word choice in several places that makes me feel that way. If you're interested I thought of some edits: I sew your pink lips to my mouth <I> Your warm breast milk pour in my hand <i> It’s makes me hot I drink your milk I’m a thirsty man And let in no light in the room My unbearble past Overall i thought it was good, conveying the emotions of a love song. Hey man, that was pretty…interesting. Kidding. I thought it was pretty good. Though the style seemed to me (a novice in poetry) to change in several places. I think it was the word choice in several places that makes me feel that way. If you’re interested I thought of some edits:

I sew your pink lips to my mouth

Your warm breast milk pour in my hand

It’s makes me hot
I drink your milk
I’m a thirsty man

And let in no light in the room

My unbearble past

Overall i thought it was good, conveying the emotions of a love song.

]]> Comment on Pieter Bruegel by Sandra_Dalene_VanAlstine http://hadikhojinian.wordpress.com/2008/06/03/pieter-bruegel/#comment-46 Sandra_Dalene_VanAlstine Sat, 01 Aug 2009 12:09:30 +0000 http://hadikhojinian.wordpress.com/?p=96#comment-46 Sandra Dalene VanAlstine - Wanted to introduce myself Thanks <a href="http://www.linkedin.com/pub/sandra-dalene-vanalstine/14/648/b3" rel="nofollow">Sandra Dalene VanAlstine</a> Sandra Dalene VanAlstine – Wanted to introduce myself

Thanks
Sandra Dalene VanAlstine

]]> Comment on Fernando Pessoa by hadi http://hadikhojinian.wordpress.com/2009/02/04/fernando-pessoa/#comment-45 hadi Tue, 23 Jun 2009 17:57:04 +0000 http://hadikhojinian.wordpress.com/2009/02/04/fernando-pessoa/#comment-45 فرزیو جان ای میل من اینه h.khojinian@gmail.com فرزیو جان ای میل من اینه
h.khojinian@gmail.com

]]> Comment on Fernando Pessoa by farzane http://hadikhojinian.wordpress.com/2009/02/04/fernando-pessoa/#comment-44 farzane Sun, 07 Jun 2009 15:49:30 +0000 http://hadikhojinian.wordpress.com/2009/02/04/fernando-pessoa/#comment-44 سلام هادی جان من آدرس ایمیل شما را گم کردمٰ لطفا کارهای زیباتون رو واسم بفرستید. فرزیو سلام هادی جان من آدرس ایمیل شما را گم کردمٰ لطفا کارهای زیباتون رو واسم بفرستید.
فرزیو

]]> Comment on A PART OF ME by fang http://hadikhojinian.wordpress.com/2008/06/21/a-part-of-me/#comment-42 fang Sun, 05 Apr 2009 14:23:27 +0000 http://hadikhojinian.wordpress.com/?p=116#comment-42 I forgot to say, I think sometimes mistakes are not mistakes. That's something english native speakers don't have : "mistakes" sometimes are a way to put things and feeling into words in a different order or priority than the norm. I understand better texts with mistakes because they take something from your language and your path of thinking and convey that in English. As long as we write, we will be ok... I forgot to say, I think sometimes mistakes are not mistakes. That’s something english native speakers don’t have : “mistakes” sometimes are a way to put things and feeling into words in a different order or priority than the norm. I understand better texts with mistakes because they take something from your language and your path of thinking and convey that in English. As long as we write, we will be ok…

]]> Comment on A PART OF ME by fang http://hadikhojinian.wordpress.com/2008/06/21/a-part-of-me/#comment-41 fang Sun, 05 Apr 2009 14:13:30 +0000 http://hadikhojinian.wordpress.com/?p=116#comment-41 Hi Hadi. I had read this post already, just didn't leave any comment before, but as you requested one.... The day you'll be able to express this with a high english level you'll feel very proud, I'm sure. Words are amazing, hurtful and liberating things...Slippery but powerful. I'm still puzzled by languages, I don't know if I'll ever get over it. See you soon for Sushis :) Hi Hadi.
I had read this post already, just didn’t leave any comment before, but as you requested one…. The day you’ll be able to express this with a high english level you’ll feel very proud, I’m sure. Words are amazing, hurtful and liberating things…Slippery but powerful. I’m still puzzled by languages, I don’t know if I’ll ever get over it.
See you soon for Sushis :)

]]> Comment on My Iranian Mate And His Lovely Voice by thelostchildhood http://hadikhojinian.wordpress.com/2009/02/04/my-iranian-mate-and-his-lovely-voice/#comment-37 thelostchildhood Sat, 07 Feb 2009 04:54:30 +0000 http://hadikhojinian.wordpress.com/2009/02/04/my-iranian-mate-and-his-lovely-voice/#comment-37 nice mate ,thanks nice mate ,thanks

]]> Comment on My Iranian Mate And His Lovely Voice by sababoy http://hadikhojinian.wordpress.com/2009/02/04/my-iranian-mate-and-his-lovely-voice/#comment-36 sababoy Wed, 04 Feb 2009 16:59:03 +0000 http://hadikhojinian.wordpress.com/2009/02/04/my-iranian-mate-and-his-lovely-voice/#comment-36 It's not true if I say moonlight won't die with its red face when you're not here. But believe it when you're here, the little tiny hole of hope to horizon won't catch the dark disappointment of night. It’s not true if I say moonlight won’t die with its red face when you’re not here. But believe it when you’re here, the little tiny hole of hope to horizon won’t catch the dark disappointment of night.

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