Hadi Khojinian

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Our Bed Of Loneliness

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I make my soul naked

I hang my gown on you

I sew your pink lips to my mouth

I melt in you

Your warm breast milk pour in my hand

It’s makes me hot

I drink your milk

I’m a thirsty man

I touch you

Beneath white crumpled sheets

Our bed of loneliness

Perfumed by your scent

I close all curtains to the sun

And let in no light in the room

Except the light of your eyes

I close all doors

Except your mind

I know that you know

My unbearble past

I see no way out

Except my way to you

Somebody knocks

Your body is trembling

By : Hadi Khojinian

Edited by : Dr Ali Reaz Rahimi

1 Comment »

  Peter Gray wrote @

Hey man, that was pretty…interesting. Kidding. I thought it was pretty good. Though the style seemed to me (a novice in poetry) to change in several places. I think it was the word choice in several places that makes me feel that way. If you’re interested I thought of some edits:

I sew your pink lips to my mouth

Your warm breast milk pour in my hand

It’s makes me hot
I drink your milk
I’m a thirsty man

And let in no light in the room

My unbearble past

Overall i thought it was good, conveying the emotions of a love song.


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